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Third Tatto ive ever done.... let me know what u think [IMG]http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m308/lilrob2436/ed.jpg[/IMG]

If i'm allowed to pick this thing apart I will. I'd have turned the person away due to the open sores or scratches or whatever on his shin( I"m guessing it's a leg?) The line work is shakey in alot of spots. Saturation ain't to great in a few key spots , like the left arm. You've seem to have done something wrong at the hair somehow , I don't know what, i'm not a professional by any means i'm just being a picky prick , like if it were MY tattoo.

Sorry I"m not done. The hands , fingers? Are way screwed up. The hair underneath the chin , isn't right at all to me.The left breast has a lump on the top. I'd be willing to bet the outline on the upper right arm doesn't take for long. The point of the tail don't look so hot as well. There's also a weird line above the right eye that doesn't make sense to me. I think the outline is shakey once again, And it appears you may have over worked the skin in the upper right hair area a bit I don't know. As a paying customer I"d be very angry with you at this point.

Wow, thats pretty poor even knowing thats your third tattoo. I guess you have a mentor who is oking you to tattoo, but it seems to me your not quite ready. That is, this tattoo is no doubt going to be a coverup, and its a large tattoo. Can we see some of your artwork?

that tattoo is lacking of depth, that's my main issue, then the line work can be worked up to come up with different stroke thickness. It's your third tattoo, you'll improve with time, don't forget to layout coloring techniques on paper as well!

yeeesh.

"layout coloring techniques on paper first" , that's got to be some of the best advice/criticism i've heard in along long time. And you did it withouth attempting to label the person scratcher , kitchen magician, scab artist or what ever lol.