final project

hi this is my final project to my previous post tell me what you think http://vampirefreaks.com/picview.php?pic_id=12347103&user=newfound_life&uid=1280792&title=&c=0&x=12&d=&g=1&s=2&fid=0 51

Ryan, The only thing that came to mind right off the bat was that you need to be a little bit more deliberate with you color, ie, darks and lights/ shadows and highlights. That would add so much to your art. But you do have some good ideas going.... and I think someone had already mention this, but keep working on the lettering too. Good job man! (wish I could draw that good when I was 15!)

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come on guys,

hey, Im not an artist but if yer 15 then I might actually be able to help a bit with some of my opinions. heh. Im not sure which body part this is for and/or the "flow" isnt hitting me. Did you reference any masks when you drew it? I do a search for masks (or theatre masks, or whatever the right term is) and see if you can find any with a good angle and lighting. Get BJ Betts book on lettering. well, ha, there are my thoughts. I dont draw for shit but Ive read a zillion opinions so Im just regurgitating some... take it for what it is.